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  1. Mrs. Kriese March 23, 2014 at 9:03 pm |

    I like the possessiveness that echoes throughout the first paragraphs–great job conveying that sentiment.

    I also love the listing of what’s in the “ginormous greenbelt” behind the backyard. Very effective elaboration!

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  2. kiraktv17 March 26, 2014 at 9:07 am |

    You have great imagery in this post! It gave a great image in my mind.

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